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The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below JelD
The chart illustrates the outcomes of a study of adult education. The first chart justifies the determination of adults to educate themselves and the second chart illustrates the way cost of adult education should be shared. Based on study, 40% adults choose to study because of the keen interest in the particular subjects whereas 38% adults decide to knowledge only for qualifications. 22% adults likely to study for the skills required in their current jobs while 20% adults enjoy learning and wants to improve their prospects of promotion. 12% of adults choose learning to change their existing job where 9% study to meet new people. Thus most adults enroll to the courses for their own curiosity and enjoyment. The pie-chart describes that the adult should divide the cost of the course individually by 40% while employers should share the cost up to 35%. Tax-payers should share at least 25% of the cost of course.
The chart illustrates the outcomes of a
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study
of adult education. The
first
chart justifies the determination of
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adults
to educate themselves and the second chart illustrates the way
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cost
of adult education should
be shared
.

Based on
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study
, 40%
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adults
choose to
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study
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because
of the keen interest in the particular subjects whereas 38%
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adults
decide to knowledge
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only
for qualifications. 22%
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adults
likely to
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study
for the
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skills
required in their
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current
jobs while 20%
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adults
enjoy learning and wants to
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improve
their prospects of promotion. 12% of
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adults
choose
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learning
to
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change
their existing job where 9%
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study
to
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meet
new
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people
.
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most
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adults
enroll to the courses for their
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own
curiosity and enjoyment.

The pie-chart
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describes
that the adult should divide the
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cost
of the course
individually
by 40% while employers should share the
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cost
up to 35%. Tax-payers should share at least 25% of the
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cost
of course
.
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IELTS academic The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below

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3 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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