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The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. jRbKp
This graphic illustrate us the museum has been visited by tourists or visitors and also how many people have been in there from 1980 to 2015. During these years, much more million people have come to the museum. Between them has been the most visited one is Louvre museum where is steadily swelled the count of the visitors until 1995. However, only It has reduced between 1995-2000 years. After that, it has been going on to increase till 2015 Vatican museum and Louvre museum almost has increased visitors count. But, in the beginning, approximate 4, 5 million people has been going to Vatican Museum, by time, ıt nearly caught Louvre Museum in 2015 Even though Shenzhen Museum decreases mid of these years, it has taken back its visitor throughout the graphs year. Outside of the other Museums, Just London Science Museum consistently has reduced long as in 2015
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us the
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museum
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visitors
and
also
how
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many
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people
have been in there from 1980 to 2015. During these years, much more
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million
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people
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come
to the
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museum
. Between them has been the most visited one is Louvre
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museum
where is
steadily
swelled the count of the
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visitors
until 1995.
However
,
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only
It has
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reduced
between 1995-2000 years. After that, it has been going on to increase till 2015

Vatican
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museum
and Louvre
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museum
almost has increased
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visitors
count.
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But
, in the beginning, approximate 4, 5 million
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people
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has
been going to Vatican
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Museum
, by time,
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ıt
nearly
caught Louvre
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Museum
in 2015

Even though
Shenzhen
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Museum
decreases mid of these years, it has taken back its
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visitor
throughout the
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graphs
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year
.
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Museums
,
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Just
London Science
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consistently
has
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reduced
long as in 2015

IELTS academic The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.

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