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The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. g5bOD
The line graph depicts the quantity of books in Burnaby Public Liberary that were read by men and women for a period of four years from 2011 to 2014. Evidently, the books that were read by people demonstrated various dynamics. At first women read more books than men. However, at the second half of the period, both of them read books the same quantity of books. In the final year of the period men read much more books then women. In more detail, the number of books were read by women inclined noticeably from well above 4000 to 8000 between 2011 and 2012. Then there was a modest rise in the number of books in Burnaby Public Liberary from 8000 to 10, 000 in 2013. However, this figure dropped gradually from 10. 000 in 2013 to approximately 8000 in 2014. By contrast, the quantity of books which were read by men climbed marginally from above 2000 to 4000 between 2011 and 2012. Then the number of books boom from 4000 in 2012 to 10. 000 in 2013. After that, there was a considerable growth in the quantity of books around 10000 followed by rising sharply to 14000 at the end of the period.
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