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The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. KPy9
The line graph provides information about how many people are visiting the four international museums in terms of time period from the year 1980-2015. Overall, the trend of Louvre and Vatican museums is upward whereas, the London science and Shenzhen museums were declined towards the end of the period. To begin with, the louvre museum had less than 8 million visitors in the year 1980, which steadily increased to just less than 10 million in the year 2015. On the other hand, Vatican museum had nearly 5. 5million initially then there was an upsurge to about 9 million in the year 2015. despite of its rise it is yet less than louvre museum statistics. In contrast, considering the given data, the London museum starting with 4million remained uniform forming a plateau until the next five years. While it dropped to less than4 million and had a plummet in later periods. comparatively, Shenzhen museum followed a downward trend until the year 2000. It is constantly parallel with the London science museum from the year early 1990 to the year 2000, outracing it with roughly 4. 9miliion visiting in the year 2015.
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1980-2015.
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1980, which
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2015.
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comparatively
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followed a downward trend until the
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2000. It is
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early 1990 to the
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2000, outracing it with roughly 4. 9miliion visiting in the
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2015.
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