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The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates the percentage of the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. At the starting of the year 2012, more than 6 percent of people trouble with work in rural areas and it was highest percentage during the year. After the 4 months it was slowly decreased to around 4. 5 percentage. During may to julay this rate of unemployment increased to above 5 percentage. End of the 5 month these unemployment rate flucturated between 5 and 6. At rest of the year, 5 percent people were not got the job. In the urben areas, percentage of unemployment was very low in the starting of the year 2012. It was around 2 percent. From january to april, this precentage was drammatic increase from 2 to 4. In next 3 months, it was significantlly drop by 2 percent. In the fourth quarter, these number of unemployment was noticeably rise at less than 6 percent. Overall, it can obserced from the line chart is that percentage of unemployment are more in the countryside areas as compare to city areas.
The line graph illustrates the
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situation in Australia in the
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2012.

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2012, more than 6
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trouble with work in rural
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and it was
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during the
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julay
this rate of
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increased to above 5
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rate
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In the
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2012. It was around 2
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was
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Overall
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are more in the countryside
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IELTS academic The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

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