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The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011.

The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. 06a3Q
The given bar chart illustrates data on the proportion of visitors to six art galleries namely: Louvre in France, Metropolitan Museum in the USA, British Museum in the UK, National Museum of Korea, Museo del Prado in Spain and State Hermitage in Russia in the year 2011. In general, it is clear that the vast majority of people visited Louvre which is located in France. Looking into details, nearly 9 million people visited Louvre Museum in France while one-third of this amount visited State Hermitage in Russia and two-third of the Louvre visitors in France, visited British Museum in the UK. 3 million people visited Museo del Prado in Spain, whereas twice of Museo del Prado visitors visited the Metropolitan Museum in the United States of America. Also, just over 3 million visitors, visited the National Museum of Korea.
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del Prado in Spain and State Hermitage in Russia in the year 2011.

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Louvre which
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Louvre
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in France while one-third of this amount
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State Hermitage in Russia and two-third of the Louvre
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British
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3 million
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Museo
del Prado in Spain, whereas twice of
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