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Population of Alain city

Population of Alain city 06aen

This graph show the number of population between 1990 to 2000 in the Alain city. It is clear from the graph that there are a lot of people who born in 1996. According to what is shown on the graph, the less number of population in the Alain is close to 1992. To compere we can see the number in 1997 and 1999 are equal. Then, the highest number in the 1998 it reached to 50000. While, there are no differences in the 1990 and 1991, in the 1991 it decreases from 1990 for 1000. Moreover, the population when increases they have benefits things and bad things. For instance, when they come over capacity the disease will increase. To sum up, we could say that the highest number in the 1996 it is close to 50000, and the less number in 1992 as well as the number was 1000.

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show
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of population Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between 1990 and 2000".between 1990 and 2000
between 1990 to 2000
 in the Alain city. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the graph that there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who born in 1996. According to what is shown
 on the graph, the less You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of population in the Alain is close to 1992. To Did you mean the verb "compare" or the noun "compère" (master of ceremonies)?comparecompère
compere
 we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 in 1997 and 1999 are equal. Then, the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 in the 1998 it reached to 50000. While, there are no differences in the 1990 and 1991, in the 1991 it decreases Nonstandard phrase. Did you mean: "from 1990 to 1000"?from 1990 to 1000
from 1990 for 1000
. Moreover
, the population when increases they have benefits things and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 things. For instance
, when they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 over capacity the disease will increase.

To sum up, we could say that the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 in the 1996 it is close to 50000, and the less You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 in 1992 as well
 as the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 was 1000. 