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Chart education level in both gender

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The chart depict the education level in both gender in any age specifically in 2010, It’s clear from the chart that the school certificate Percent is the same in both men and women. Overall, The highest percent in women and men Goes to people with no qualification after that the second higher percent it’s belong to people with school certificate Which is an equal in both gender. As we see the most amount of woman has no qualification Which is 38% Why have a school certificate is 33%, and the less percent for the university degree level is 29%. Comparing to men, the people with no qualification is less than women which is 35%, as we say before the school certificate is equal in both gender which is 33%, in men The university degree level is higher than women and that is 32%.
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Which is an equal in both gender. As we
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see
the most amount of woman has no qualification Which is 38% Why have a
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school
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certificate
is 33%, and the less
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percent
for the university degree level is 29%. Comparing to
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men
, the
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people
with no qualification is less than
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women
which is 35%, as we say
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school
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is equal in both gender which is 33%, in
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men
The university degree level is higher than
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IELTS academic Chart education level in both gender

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