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The graph shows the number of international travellers to three different regions in a European country during five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.

The graph shows the number of international travellers to three different regions in a European country during five years. ElMEM
The line graph demonstrates how many foreigners visited three different areas in a European country during the given period from 1987 to 2007. A quick glance at the graph that the number of overseas visitors to three different areas experienced upward trends, while the figure for the lake witnessed a quick drop in the last five years. 1987 was the year that 40 thousand people visited the coast. This figure dipped to 35 thousand people in 1992 and increased rapidly to 75 thousand in 2005, which was the highest figure. The mountains attracted 20 thousand visitors in 1987. Having some fluctuations in the first twenty years, there was a rise to 35 thousand in 2007, which was the smallest data recorded in three areas. With regard to the lake, 20 thousand was the number of international travellers visited the lake in 1987. The visitors count grew significantly in the first fifteen years, overtaking the figure for the mountains and the coasts in 1992 and 2001 respectively. After reaching a peak at 75 thousand in 2002, the figure saw a rapidly decrease with 50 thousand visitors in 2007.
The line graph demonstrates how
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foreigners visited three
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areas in a European country during the
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period from 1987 to 2007.

A quick glance at the graph that the number of overseas
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visitors
to three
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different
areas experienced upward trends, while the
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figure
for the lake witnessed a quick drop in the last five years.

1987 was the
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year
that 40 thousand
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people
visited the coast. This
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figure
dipped to 35 thousand
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people
in 1992 and increased
rapidly
to 75 thousand in 2005, which was the highest
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figure
. The mountains attracted 20 thousand
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visitors
in 1987. Having
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some
fluctuations in the
first
twenty years, there was a rise to 35 thousand in 2007, which was the smallest data recorded in three areas.

With regard to the lake, 20 thousand was the number of international
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travellers
visited the lake in 1987. The
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visitors
count grew
significantly
in the
first
fifteen years, overtaking the
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figure
for the mountains and the coasts in 1992 and 2001
respectively
. After reaching a peak at 75 thousand in 2002, the
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figure
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saw
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rapidly decrease
with 50 thousand
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visitors
in 2007.

IELTS academic The graph shows the number of international travellers to three different regions in a European country during five years.

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