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The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in UK in year 1950 to 2000

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The line graph reveals the information of marriages and divorces in UK in period of 50 years. At a glance, all categories shows an upward trend. Numbers are measured in thousand. Primarily, there was a rise in number of all marriages from 1950 to 1980, and reached at 540 and falls down to 450 in 2000. The same trend was observed in first marriages with a difference of around 100. Likewise, it was 350 in 1950 and surged upto 420 in 1980 and again declined to 320 in 2000. However, there was a slight fluctuation throughout second marriages. It was 90 at 1950 falls slightly by 15 in 1960 and a growth of 110 till 1980. Now show the downwards growth upto 100 in 2000. Overall, divorces have been increasing significantly day by day.
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, there was a rise in number of all
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marriages
from 1950 to 1980, and reached at 540 and falls down to 450 in 2000. The same trend
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in
first
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marriages
with a difference of around 100.
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, it was 350 in 1950 and surged
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420 in 1980 and again declined to 320 in 2000.

However
, there was a slight fluctuation throughout second
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marriages
. It was 90 at 1950 falls
slightly
by 15 in 1960 and a growth of 110 till 1980.
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Overall
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