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The graph below shows that in a few months we do not know how many people have a good time with this disease but they do have 3PM

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The graph indicates quantity of fruit associated with the rate of fertilizer utilized in 2013. Overall, it is true that the figures for fruit processed by a farm gradually increased in the time period. While scale of fertilizer experience fluctuations. As the graph shows, amount of fruit in 2013 rose slightly from 2 tonnes to 4 tonnes over eight month periods compared to the period from January to April scale of fertilizer increased in a tiny fraction. Furthermore, there was sudden drop for the proportions of fruit between September 3 December, while amount of fertilizer was erratic during period of May to December.
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associated with the rate of
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utilized in 2013.
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processed by a farm
gradually
increased in the time
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scale of
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experience fluctuations. As the graph
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, amount of
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in 2013 rose
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eight month
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compared to the
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from January to April scale of
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increased in a tiny fraction.
Furthermore
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between September 3 December, while amount of
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was erratic during
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of May to December.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows that in a few months we do not know how many people have a good time with this disease but they do have 3PM

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