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The provided bar chart compares the leisure hours enjoyed by male and female based on the employment status from 1998 to 1999.

The provided bar chart compares the leisure hours enjoyed by male and female based on the employment status from 1998 to 1999. N8mEN
The provided bar chart compares the leisure hours enjoyed by male and female based on the employment status from 1998 to 1999. It is clear from the graph that female in all respective of employment status enjoys time killing when compared to male. Men and women, who are unemployed and retired, spent more leisure hours when compared to employed people. Unemployed males and retired males have maximum leisure time, that is approximately 80 hours per week, but in the case of unemployed females and retired females, they have comparatively less leisure time, that is about 72 hours per week. It is interesting to see that employed full time males have more free time than employed part time females, which are approximately 48 hours and 40 hours per week respectively. Fulltime employed women have comparatively less free time which is about 38 hours per week. Housewives have approximately 50 hours per week leisure time which is slightly more than the leisure time that fulltime employed males get.
The provided bar chart compares the
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enjoyed by male and
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female
based on the employment status from 1998 to 1999. It is
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clear
from the graph that
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female
in all respective of employment status enjoys
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time
killing when compared to male.
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and women, who
are unemployed
and retired, spent more
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leisure
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hours
when compared to
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employed
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people
. Unemployed
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males
and retired
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males
have maximum
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leisure
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time
,
that is
approximately 80
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hours
per
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week
,
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but
in the case of unemployed
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females
and retired
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females
, they have
comparatively
less
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leisure
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time
,
that is
about 72
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hours
per
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week
. It is interesting to
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that
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employed
full
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time
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males
have more free
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than
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employed
part
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time
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females
, which are approximately 48
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hours
and 40
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hours
per
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week
respectively
.
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Fulltime
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employed
women have
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less free
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time
which is about 38
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hours
per
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week
. Housewives have approximately 50
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hours
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week
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leisure
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time
which is
slightly
more than the
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leisure
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that
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fulltime
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employed
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males
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get
.

IELTS academic The provided bar chart compares the leisure hours enjoyed by male and female based on the employment status from 1998 to 1999.

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