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online purchase description process. no more than 150 words

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The diagram illustrates the process of online food shopping. The process consists of eight stages, starting with browsing for the products online and ending with the delivery of the order. First, customers view the items on the website of the supermarket and choose what they intend to buy. The customer then adds the product they selected to the shopping basket. Next, the customer fills in the details of the address, product and chooses a payment method to complete the purchase and send it to the warehouse. Once the order has been confirmed, an employee or a robot will pick the food the customer has ordered. The food is then passed through to be packed into bags attached with printed receipts. They are then loaded onto trucks. Finally, the order is delivered to the customer's address.
The diagram illustrates the process of online food shopping. The process consists of eight stages, starting with browsing for the products online and ending with the delivery of the order.
First
,
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customers
view the items on the website of the supermarket and choose what they intend to
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buy
. The
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customer
then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
adds
the product they selected to the shopping basket.
Next
, the
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customer
fills in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of the address, product and chooses a payment method to complete the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
and
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send
it to the warehouse. Once the order has
been confirmed
, an employee or a robot will pick the food the
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customer
has ordered. The food is then passed through to
be packed
into bags attached with printed receipts. They are then loaded onto trucks.
Finally
, the order
is delivered
to the customer's address.
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IELTS academic online purchase description process. no more than 150 words

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  American English
1 paragraphs
135 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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