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The graph shows the number of ebook readers sell in Mr Widget's Gadget Store in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The statistics in the line graph illustrates the changes in the number of sales of ebook readers in Mr. Widget's Gadget Store in 2011. In general, there was a marginal drop in the number of sold product even though significant fluctuations can be seen throughout the year. The kickoff three months were lucrative for the gadget shop in sales of ebook reader until the end of March. Because, it had 50 cases which electronic books have been sold before it doubles. Then, until the first month of summer, the number of people who goes to store in purpose of purchasing e-readers suddenly reversed by 40 gadgets. Later, by the next two months, device shop recovered the marketing of electrical book readers and went up visibly from 60 to 120. Once the autumn came, it hit a new peak in September by 130 readers. Albeit, as the weather got colder shopping ebook devices also fell back and reached the lowest point (40) of marketing in the December. Overall, the big initial changes throughout months did not decide its final point in the trade of ebook tools.
The statistics in the line graph illustrates the
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changes
in the number of sales of
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ebook
readers in Mr. Widget's Gadget Store in 2011.
In general
, there was a marginal drop in the number of sold product
even though
significant fluctuations can be
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seen
throughout the year.

The kickoff three
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months
were lucrative for the gadget shop in sales of
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ebook
reader until the
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end
of March.
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Because
, it had 50 cases which electronic books have
been sold
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before
it doubles. Then, until the
first
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month
of summer, the number of
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people
who goes to store in purpose of purchasing e-readers
suddenly
reversed by 40 gadgets. Later, by the
next
two
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months
, device shop recovered the marketing of electrical book readers and went up
visibly
from 60 to 120. Once the autumn came, it hit a new peak in September by 130 readers. Albeit, as the weather
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got
colder shopping
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ebook
devices
also
fell back and reached the lowest point (40) of marketing in the December.

Overall
, the
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big
initial
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changes
throughout
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months
did not decide its final point in the trade of
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ebook
tools.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the number of ebook readers sell in Mr Widget's Gadget Store in 2011.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
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