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The graph shows the number of deaths caused by terrorist attacks in three countries between 2011 and 2015.

The graph shows the number of deaths caused by terrorist attacks in three countries between 2011 and 2015. w9wY
The graph illustrates the amount of demises caused by terrorist attacks in Afghanistan, Iraq and Nigeria from 2011 to 2015. Overall the most striking feature of the graph is that most of the deaths have been obsevered in Iraq and Nigeria during the year 2014 whereas, in Afghanistan, the death ratio was at peak in 2015. A glance at graph reflects, the number of deaths owing to terrorism in three countries are similar in 2011 which is about 3000 while it have observed slight decline in the next year Additionally, Nigeria and Iraq faced sudden increment in the death numbers that is more than 6000 and 4500 in 2013 respectively However, Afghanistan had minor raise in demises(3000) in 2013. Considering the other factors deaths cases in all the three nations have been suddenly increased in the next year Nigeria and Iraq have the highest deaths cases throughout the period of five years because of terrorits activity which is 9000 and 7500 however, it has been pluged in 2015. Furthermore, graudal raise in death cases have been observed by Afghanistan in the next two years.
The graph illustrates the amount of demises caused by terrorist attacks in Afghanistan, Iraq and Nigeria from 2011 to 2015.

Overall
the most striking feature of the graph is that most of the deaths have been
obsevered
in Iraq and Nigeria during the
year
2014 whereas, in Afghanistan, the death ratio was at peak in 2015.

A glance at graph reflects, the number of deaths owing to terrorism in three countries are similar in 2011 which is about 3000 while it have observed slight decline in the
next
year
Additionally
, Nigeria and Iraq faced sudden increment in the death numbers
that is
more than 6000 and 4500 in 2013
respectively
However
, Afghanistan had minor raise in demises(3000) in 2013.

Considering the other factors deaths cases in all the three nations have been
suddenly
increased in the
next
year
Nigeria and Iraq have the highest deaths cases throughout the period of five years
because
of
terrorits
activity which is 9000 and 7500
however
, it has been
pluged
in 2015.
Furthermore
,
graudal
raise in death cases have
been observed
by Afghanistan in the
next
two years.
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