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Percentage of UK people who consumed daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetable in 2002, 2006 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Percentage of UK people who consumed daily recommended amount of fruit and vegetable in 2002, 2006 and 2010. lb3X

The bar chart given represents, in percentages, how much fruit and vegetables have been consumed during three specific years (2002, 2006, 2010) in the United Kingdom, divided into three categories: men, women and children. Overall, it can be noticed the pattern is similar for all the three categories: comparing the years 2002 and 2006 the consume of the considered food increases, then in 2010 it decreases but it is still higher than the starting point. In more detail, it can be seen that women are the biggest consumers of healthy food, being always the highest percentage in the three years; In 2002 one fourth of the women of the UK consumed the right amount of greens, in 2006 its percentage reached the peak at 32 but in 2010 its consumption dropped by 6%. The men’s percentages always are about the same, just a few percentage points lower. However, they are more consistent than women. Children are in last place, although they grew by 5% from 2002 to 2010.

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, women and children.

Overall
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the consume
 of the considered food increases, then in 2010 it decreases This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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 higher than the starting point.

In more detail, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
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 that women are the biggest consumers of healthy food, being always the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 in the three years; In 2002 one fourth of the women of the UK consumed the right amount of greens, in 2006 its You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 reached the peak at 32 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in 2010 its consumption dropped by 6%. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
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percentages
The adverb 'always' usually goes after the verb 'are'.are always
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 about the same, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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 a few You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percentage
 points lower. However
, they are more consistent than women.

Children are in last place, although they grew by 5% from 2002 to 2010. 