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the graph below illustrates the consumption of fish and some several kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004

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The graph below illustrates the consumption of fish and some several kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004Overall the most preferred white meat are chicken and fish by European countries and least are red meat that lamb and beef respectivelyFurthermore, the most liked and consumed food in European countries is chicken as that of 145gms in 1979 which is rising gradually year to year and highest in 2004 that of 250 gms similarly the fish consumption in year 1979 was around 60% which remain mostly constant to 2004 as compared to lamb and beef. this two commodity are preferred by people and consumed respectivelyMoreover lamb and beef are taking path downward and not a preferred commodity in countries as of beef consumption slightly rises in year 1984 and again started downward towards less consumption. in 2004 beef consumption is lowest of all years similarly the consumption of lamp decreases year to year which is around 150gms in 1979 and 50gms in 2004
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between 1979 and 2004Overall the most preferred white meat are chicken and fish by European
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and highest in 2004 that of 250
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1979 was around 60% which remain
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are taking path downward and not a preferred commodity in
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1984 and again
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2004
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is lowest of all years
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of lamp decreases
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which is around 150gms in 1979 and 50gms in 2004

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