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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. p9x9
The given diagrams above represent the process for a wave-energy machine and its place. Firstly, it can be seen that due to wave direction water rises up. Secondly, when the water achieves an aim level there will occur an air flow. There is a circulation of air in electricity generator. The air flow from down chamber outs from high exit and out one from up gets to another chamber. Then thanks to the air flowing from lower chamber the turbine starts to spin. Finally, when turbine is spinning the elecricity generation starts to work. At the second picture it could observed the location options of wave-energy machnes. It is clearly demonstrates that small waves with low output produce smaller wave energy than large one with high output. In conclusion. it should be mentioned that costs of two machines, as it has predicted are different. Consequently hugest one is more exspensive than tiniest one.
The
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diagrams above represent the process for a wave-energy machine and its place.

Firstly
, it can be
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seen
that due to wave direction water rises up.
Secondly
, when the water achieves an aim level there will occur an
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air
flow. There is a circulation of
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air
in electricity generator. The
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air
flow from down chamber outs from high exit and out one from up
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gets
to another chamber. Then thanks to the
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air
flowing from lower chamber the turbine
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starts
to spin.
Finally
, when turbine is spinning the
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elecricity
generation
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starts
to work.

At the second picture it could
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observed
the location options of wave-energy
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machnes
. It is
clearly
demonstrates that
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small
waves with low output produce smaller wave energy than large one with high output.
In conclusion
.
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it
should
be mentioned
that costs of two machines, as it has predicted are
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different
.
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Consequently
A determiner is probably missing here: "the hugest".
hugest
one is more
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exspensive
than
A determiner is probably missing here: "the tiniest".
tiniest
one.

IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.