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The chart below shows numbers of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017.

The chart below shows numbers of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. mReL
The vertical bar graph depicts the data about numbers of elder people taking participation in various well-known sports in an area for the years 1997 and 2017. All the data is calibrated in Number in thousands. Over the glance, it can be seen that the most popular activities was the Gentle walking. It had 50 participants in 1997 and it increased by 5 participants in 2017. Number of players in Football and Hiking had approximately same, they both increased significantly by approximately same numbers of players about 14. Moreover, Gym was remained same numbers of athletes at 35 and Jogging was upsurged slightly at 35. However, Basketball and Cricket had the least numbers of players in the both year with vice versa. Where Basketball was sharply increased its players from 9 to 24, and Cricket was dropped huge numbers of players from 26 to 6. Overall, it can be said that Gentle walking was the most popular sport activity among the elder with the least interest in Basketball and Cricket.
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taking participation in various well-known sports in an area for the years 1997 and 2017. All the data
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that the most popular activities was the Gentle walking. It had 50 participants in 1997 and it increased by 5 participants in 2017.
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in Football and Hiking had approximately same, they both increased
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about 14.

Moreover
, Gym
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of athletes at 35 and Jogging
was upsurged
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, Basketball and Cricket had the least
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in the both year with vice versa. Where Basketball was
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from 9 to 24, and Cricket
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from 26 to 6.

Overall
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that Gentle walking was the most popular sport activity among the elder with the least interest in Basketball and Cricket.

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