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The graph shows the main sources of fossil fuel carbon emissions from 1800 to 2004

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The given graph depicts the essential sources of carbon emissions from fossil fuel between 1800 and 2004. Overall, the total carbon emisions increased dramatically in 2004. This means an ultimate peak for carbon emissions in 1950 to 2004. There is a similarity im which carbon emissions are growing in the period of 200 years. However, the most noticeable point in the following graph is occuring in 50 years that can be called a disaster.
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graph depicts the essential sources of
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emissions from fossil fuel between 1800 and 2004.
Overall
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carbon
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emisions
increased
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in 2004. This means an ultimate peak for
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carbon
emissions in 1950 to 2004. There is a similarity
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im
which
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carbon
emissions are growing in the period of 200 years.
However
, the most noticeable point in the following graph is
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occuring
in 50 years that can
be called
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IELTS academic The graph shows the main sources of fossil fuel carbon emissions from 1800 to 2004

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