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Data will be collected from the main informants (camp residents) through questionnaires, and then to clarify some points that need more focus, focus groups were resorted to with the main informant, in four displacement camps in the north of Syria and a study of the mechanism of transition to permanent housing and a study some of the positive and negative aspects of the transition to sustainable housing.

Data will be collected from the main informants (camp residents) through questionnaires, and then to clarify some points that need more focus, focus groups were resorted to with the main informant, in four displacement camps in the north of Syria and a study of the mechanism of transition to permanent housing and a study some of the positive and negative aspects of the transition to sustainable housing. drlY2
Data will be collected from the main informants (camp residents) through questionnaires, and then to clarify some points that need more focus, focus groups were resorted to with the main informant, in four displacement camps in the north of Syria and a study of the mechanism of transition to permanent housing and a study some of the positive and negative aspects of the transition to sustainable housing.
Data will
be collected
from the main informants (camp residents) through questionnaires, and then to clarify
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points that need more focus, focus groups
were resorted
to with the main informant, in four displacement camps in the north of Syria and a study of the mechanism of transition to permanent housing and a study
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aspects of the transition to sustainable housing.
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IELTS academic Data will be collected from the main informants (camp residents) through questionnaires, and then to clarify some points that need more focus, focus groups were resorted to with the main informant, in four displacement camps in the north of Syria and a study of the mechanism of transition to permanent housing and a study some of the positive and negative aspects of the transition to sustainable housing.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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