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The graph shows the information about the number of marriages in the UK from 1951 to 2001

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The line graph demonstrates the propotion of three various types of wedding ceremonies in the United Kingdom over 5 decades. Overall, it can be seen that All marriages and First marriages showed an downward trend over the period given, with the exception of Remarriages. A closer look at the data reveals that the number of all marriages started at the highest point at exactly 400000 marriage couples in 1951. Meanwhile First marriages saw 350000 cases and 100000 ones were the co sequence recorded from Remarriages in the same year. After 20 years, the number of All marriages climbed up at roughly 450000 pairs. It was also noticeable that the other figures didn't display any significantly change. Ended in 2001, there was a dramatical drop in revenues in All marriages and First marriages with approximately 380000 and 250000 patterns respectively. In term of Remarriages, by contrast, this sample stabilized over several years then it rapidly increased and reached 200000 new families by 2001.

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