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The graph shows the information about influation adjusted four-star petrol prices from the year 1903 to 2005.

The graph shows the information about influation adjusted four-star petrol prices from the year 1903 to 2005. pAM3
The line graph illustrate the four-star petrol price adjusted due to inflation in the 105 years period time by 1903 to 2005. In the starting year 1903, the petrol price was 400 then after the rate was highely increase to the year 1917 for 900 price which is highest rate for whole 102 years period time. However, in the year 1927 or 1928 the petrol price is fallen to 270 price, it was the lowest price in that period time. Moreover, the rate were fluctuated to the year 1949 and the price was same as 19 years ago. In the year 1956, the price was raised upto 470 and after 19 years the rate were slowly doen to the 440. Over, the 3 year the rate was again decrease to the 310 price and then the rate were similar in 1975. In the year 2000 the price was 480 which was extension to the last 19 years. At the end of the year 2005 the rate were somewhat grow to the first year of the inflation. To conclude that, the petrol prices were flctuated to the entire year from 1093 to 2005.
The line graph illustrate the four-star
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adjusted due to inflation in the 105 years period time by 1903 to 2005.

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1903, the
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was 400 then after the
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1917 for 900 price

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for whole 102 years period time.
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1927 or 1928 the
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is fallen
to 270
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, it was

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the
lowest
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in that period time.
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, the
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were fluctuated
to the
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1949 and the
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was same as 19 years ago.

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1956, the
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was raised
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470 and after 19 years the
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were
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to the 440. Over, the 3
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was again
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to the 310
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and then the
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were similar in 1975. In the
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2000 the
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was 480 which was
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extension


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the last 19 years. At the
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2005 the
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were somewhat
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of the inflation.

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were
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flctuated
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from 1093 to 2005.
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