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The bar charts provide information about the ages that men and women got married in a certain country in 1996 and 2008.

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The bar charts provide information about the ages that men and women got married in a certain country in 1996 and 2008. Overall, the age that both sexes got married was higher in 2008, while women tended to marry at a younger age than men. In 1996, 1 percent of women got married between the ages of 16 and 19, while in 2008 this figure was about three times lower. On the other hand, no men in this age group got married in either year. The most common age for women to get married was from 25-29 years of age, at around 11. 5 percent in both years. As for men, the age groups of 25-29 and 30-34 were equally the most common age to get married, with about 9 percent of men getting married within these age groups. However, by 2006, men marrying between 25 and 29 had fallen to 8 percent, while 11 percent of men now got married between the ages of 30 and 34. the 35-39 and 40-44 age groups showed a similar trend. The percentage of women in these groups went up slightly, while for men they rose even more. The 35-39 category went from 7 percent to 9 percent, and the oldest group went from 5 percent to almost 7 percent.
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married in a certain country in 1996 and 2008.

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that both sexes
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married was higher in 2008, while
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they rose even more. The 35-39 category went from 7
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to 9
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, and the oldest
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went from 5
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