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The graph illustrates the rate of wages of some countries in terms of percentage for ten years from 1993 to 2003. It can be obviously seen, the graph goes up and down frequently and in addition, the wages in 1998 have the highest figure compared to other years. Generally, the graph has no erratic movement. As can be recognized from the graph, the amount of wages in 1993 until 1995 had a sharp promotes to 3% and 4% respectively. But after that it started decreasing to 3% then, it goes up again to soaring up to the highest peak of 6% for the year of 1998. Next, the graph is halved for the year 1989. And in the following, it remains at the same wage of 3% and its Started falls down gently to 2002. And finally, the trend is slightly upward. The sum up, excluding the values for wages of 1997 to 1999, other figures vary between 1% and 4%.

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, the wages in 1998 have the highest figure compared to other years. Generally
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The sum up, excluding the values for wages of 1997 to 1999, other figures vary between 1% and 4%. 