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The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). 9Kmr

The picture illustrates how we use a recyling technique to recycle our organic waste for coverting it into the fertilizer. Overall, the process is composed of five steps, using a simple bottle with gaps for air enterance and adding waste into it beacuse of the heat and time it will convert into useful compost. To begin, A cylinderical bottle of 2 cubic centimeter with 4 slits for the air crossing is used for the process. Secondly, addition of waste which is mixture of paper, grass and waste food is filled up to 15 centimeter for the two times. futhurmore, the Nitrogen and the water is inserted in to the vessel, however keep in mind that the water must be hot. In next step, the container is sealed using any media and put it near to the heat so it will be easy for consistently heating. At the end, After spending 6 months, the fertilizer is ready for use, it is clearly visible in step five.

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 technique to recycle our organic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmisuse
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 it into the fertilizer.

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 of the heat and time it will convert into useful compost.

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begin
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 for the process. Secondly
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, the Nitrogen and the water is inserted
 in to the vessel, however
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 step, the container is sealed
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 it will be easy for consistently
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, After spending 6 months, the fertilizer is ready for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
, it is clearly
 visible in step five. 