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The charts above give information on the ages of people when they got married in one country in 1996 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

The charts above give information on the ages of people when they got married in one country in 1996 and 2008. oarB
The charts provide a comparison of marriage age trends among men and women in 1996 and 2008 in one particular nation. The data is divided into six age groups, ranging from 16-19 to 40-44. An overall assessment of the data reveals that women tended to marry at an earlier age than men, while over time both sexes tended to delay marriage by a few years. Peak marriage age for both sexes was in their late twenties to early thirties. In the youngest age group, only 1 percent of women got married in 1996, while this figure had fallen to just a small fraction of a percent by 2008. Conversely, no men entered into marriage at this age in either period. The most typical age for a women to marry was from 25-29, and this percentage remained constant at just under 12 in both years. For women in the older age groups, there was an increase of around one percentage point in each as well as a steady decline in the percentages as women got older. As for men, in 1996 the age groups of 25-29 and 30-34 were equally popular, with approximately 9 percent of men getting married at these ages. Moreover, there were also significant increases in the 35-39 and 40-44 demographics, with the percentages climbing from 7 to 9 and 5 to 7, respectively.
The charts provide a comparison of
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trends among
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and
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women
in 1996 and 2008 in one particular nation. The data
is divided
into six
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age
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groups
, ranging from 16-19 to 40-44.

An
overall
assessment of the data reveals that
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women
tended to marry at an earlier
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age
than
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men
, while over time both sexes tended to delay
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marriage
by a few years. Peak
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marriage
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age
for both sexes was in their late twenties to early thirties.

In the youngest
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age
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,
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only
1 percent of
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women
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got
married in 1996, while this figure had fallen to
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a
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small
fraction of a percent by 2008.
Conversely
, no
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men
entered into
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at this
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age
in either period. The most typical
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for a
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women
to marry was from 25-29, and this
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percentage
remained constant at
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under 12 in both years. For
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women
in the older
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, there was an increase of around one
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percentage
point in each
as well
as a steady decline in the
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as
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women
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got
older.

As for
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men
, in 1996 the
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age
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groups
of 25-29 and 30-34 were
equally
popular, with approximately 9 percent of
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men
getting married at these
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ages
.
Moreover
, there were
also
significant increases in the 35-39 and 40-44 demographics, with the
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percentages
climbing from 7 to 9 and 5 to 7,
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The charts above give information on the ages of people when they got married in one country in 1996 and 2008.

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