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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The following bar chart report presents the outcome of a study about the drinking patterns and the inhabitant coffee and tea purchasing in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart in the last 4 weeks. Overall, the purchase of fresh coffee least voted by the populations in five Australian cities compared to the others. In Adelaide, purchased instant coffee voted the most by the people. While the other cities reveal that most of the populations prefer had coffee or tea in a café than any other habits Notably, 44% of the population in Sydney purchased fresh coffee, which is 1% more than Melbourne, and 6% more than Hobart voted for this drinking style. On the other side, populations of Hobart prefer to acquire instant coffee 54% in the last four weeks, populations in Brisbane and Adelaide are not far behind with about 53% and 50% respectively. Moving on to the had coffee or tea in a café, we can see a reversal from the previous habit where Melbourne and Sydney are at around 64% and 62% respectively but Hobart populations take the second-highest percentage which is around 63%. Brisbane also not far behind with 55. 5%. Overall, most residents in five different cities in Australia voted for had coffee or tea in a café the most compared to other habits.
The following bar chart report presents the outcome of a study about the drinking patterns and the inhabitant
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purchasing in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart in the last 4 weeks.

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of fresh
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least voted by the
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in five Australian cities compared to the others. In Adelaide,
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instant
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voted the most by the
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. While the
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cities reveal that most of the
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prefer had
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coffee
or
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in a café than any
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other
habits

Notably
, 44% of the
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in Sydney
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, which is 1% more than Melbourne, and 6% more than Hobart voted for this drinking style. On the
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side,
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of Hobart prefer to acquire instant
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54% in the last four weeks,
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in Brisbane and Adelaide are not far behind with about 53% and 50%
respectively
.

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in a café, we can
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a reversal from the previous habit where Melbourne and Sydney are at around 64% and 62%
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Hobart
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take the second-highest percentage which is around 63%. Brisbane
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not far behind with 55. 5%.

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cities in Australia voted for had
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in a café the most compared to
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habits.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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6.5
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