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The graph shows the demand for energy and the energy available for fossil fuels in Freedonia from 1985 to 2005. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph shows the demand for energy and the energy available for fossil fuels in Freedonia from 1985 to 2005. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. PVR8J
The line graph indicates the relationship between demand for energy and the energy available from fossil fuels in Freedonia during the period between 1985 and 2005. It is apparent that there are 2 opposite trends shown on the graph from 1985 to 2005. The demand for energy dipped steadily between 1985 and 1990 from 5 units of energy to approximately 2 units. From 1990 until about 1995, energy demand appeared to level off and remained constant at about 2 units of energy. From this time onward, energy demand rocketed dramatically from 2 units of energy in 1996 and is projected to reach 7 units in the year 2005. In constrast, the energy available showed the significant fluctuation in the period between 1985 and 2000. The amount of energy available from fossil fuels soared sharply from about 3. 5 units in 1985 until it reached a peak of 6. 5 in 1995. From this point onwards, it is projected to slip back spectacularly until it keep steady at an availability level of around 2. 5 units from the year 2000. Overall, it is noticeable that the demand of the energy exceeded its supply. In the future, Freedonians will have to enforce energy saving measures or look towards the use of alternatives sources of energy.
The line graph indicates the relationship between
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for
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and the
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available from fossil fuels in
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Freedonia
during the period between 1985 and 2005. It is apparent that there are 2 opposite trends shown on the graph from 1985 to 2005.

The
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demand
for
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energy
dipped
steadily
between 1985 and 1990 from 5
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units
of
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energy
to approximately 2
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units
. From 1990 until about 1995,
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energy
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demand
appeared to level off and remained constant at about 2
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units
of
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energy
. From this time onward,
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energy
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demand
rocketed
dramatically
from 2
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units
of
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in 1996 and
is projected
to reach 7
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in the year 2005.

In
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, the
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available
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showed
the significant fluctuation in the period between 1985 and 2000. The amount of
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energy
available from fossil fuels soared
sharply
from about 3. 5
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units
in 1985 until it reached a peak of 6. 5 in 1995. From this point onwards, it
is projected
to slip back
spectacularly
until it
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keep
steady at an availability level of around 2. 5
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units
from the year 2000.

Overall
, it is noticeable that the
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demand
of the
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energy
exceeded its supply. In the future,
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Freedonians
will
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have to
enforce
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energy
saving measures or look towards the
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use
of alternatives sources of
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energy
.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the demand for energy and the energy available for fossil fuels in Freedonia from 1985 to 2005. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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