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the graph shows the cost for watching movies and change in market share of three different of watching movies

the graph shows the cost for watching movies and change in market share of three different of watching movies Q5ldP

The given line graph demonstrate the money spent on watching shows and illustrates the switich of market share by various platform to watch movies. overall, it is clearly visible that people had showed the great presence in the theatre pass for enjoying movies. In 2005, the cost of DVD player was 8 which had decline smoothly to 6 in 2007. In the next year it had a steady increase till 2011 to almost 9. the expense spent on legal download from internet was 6 in 2005. After 2 year, it had crossed the cost of DVD in 2009 and short up slowly in the next year. coming to the account of cinema ticket and it was clear winner in the term of most individuals spend on this. In 2005, it had gained 9 and it had gramatic rose in 2009. however, it had crossed the boundary line of 14.

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shows
 and illustrates the Possible spelling mistake found.switch
switich
 of market share by various platform to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 movies. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOverall
overall
, it is clearly
 visible that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 the great presence in the Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.theater
theatre
 pass for enjoying movies. In 2005, the cost of DVD player was 8 which had Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "declined".declined
decline
smoothly
 to 6 in 2007. In the next
 year it had a steady increase till 2011 to almost 9. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 expense spent on legal download from internet was 6 in 2005. After 2 year, it had crossed the cost of DVD in 2009 and short up slowly
 in the next
 year. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterComing
coming
 to the account of cinema ticket and it was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 winner in the term of most individuals spend on this. In 2005, it had gained 9 and it had Possible spelling mistake found.dramatic
gramatic
 rose in 2009. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHowever
however
, it had crossed the boundary line of 14. 