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The graph shows the changes of science park in 2008 and now.

The graph shows the changes of science park in 2008 and now. VYNRD
The map gives information about the changes which have been taken in the science park from 2008 to the current day. All in all, the major modification have been recorded in the north west area except the West side. In 2008, there was grassland in the north west corner, which has been tottaly cleaned and now the research and development building have been constructed on that place, whereas the business unit is at the same place as it was in the 2008. The University hun has been replaced with the reception area, which was along with the office in the pasr6. The area of cyber security building has been expanded the grassland and woodland in the east direction. In the south west side, the woodland have been untouched. The innovation centre has been interchanged with IT- centre. The new bus stop and railway station have been built in the east and South side respectively. Lastly, from north east corner to the West side, new cycle path has been constructed along the road in the present time.
The map gives information about the
changes
which have
been taken
in the science park from 2008 to the
current
day. All in all, the major modification have
been recorded
in the
north west
area except the West side. In 2008, there was grassland in the
north west
corner, which has been
tottaly
cleaned and
now
the research and development building have
been constructed
on that place, whereas the business unit is at the same place as it was in the 2008. The University
hun
has
been replaced
with the reception area, which was along with the office in the pasr6. The area of cyber security building has
been expanded
the grassland and woodland in the east direction. In the
south west
side, the woodland have
been untouched
. The innovation
centre
has
been interchanged
with IT-
centre
. The new bus
stop
and railway station have
been built
in the east and South side
respectively
.
Lastly
, from
north east
corner to the West side, new cycle path has
been constructed
along the road in the present time.
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