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The bar chart illustrates the total number of international immigrants in four different countries in 2000 and 2017 in millions and the table represents their respective share in the population of these countries. Overall, a significantly higher number of immigrants were migrated to the USA in 2000 and 2017 as compared to the other three countries. However, Germany had the maximum percentage of immigration population in comparison to all other countries in 2017. In regarding the number of international migrants, the USA had the maximum number of migrants in 2000, more than 30 million which was more than the migrants to all other three countries combined. By 2017, the number of migrants to the USA had been increased by more than 15 million and reached the maximum number of 50 million. The number of immigrants to Russia and Germany were remained close to 10 million in 2000 and 2017. On the other hand, a minimum number of people were migrated to India and their number remained well under 10 million. The maximum percentage share in the populaton by immigrants in 2017 was observed in Germany, 14. 7%, followed by 13. 5% and 8. 1% in the USA and Russia, respectively. On the other hand, immigrants were contributed too little to the Indian population, just under 0. 5%.

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