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The line chart illustrates birth rate and death rate in a European country between 1950 and 2050.

The line chart illustrates birth rate and death rate in a European country between 1950 and 2050. 8LEDk
The line chart illustrates birth rate and death rate in a European country between 1950 and 2050. Overall, it is clear that while the birth rate is predicted to decline slowly, the death rate is forecasted to increase slightly. The birth rate rose significantly from around 780. 000 in 1950 to 1. 000. 000 in 1970. Then it hit a low of under 600. 000 in 1990. The figure for the birth rate increased steadily to 700. 000 in 2010. It is predicted to remain stable in 2050. The death rate was 700. 000 in 1950 and remained AT this level until 2010. In the next 20 years, the mortality rate dropped slightly to under 700. 000. At the end the of the period, the figure for death rate is projected to increase to 800. 000.
The line chart illustrates
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and death
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in a European country between 1950 and 2050.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that while the
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birth
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rate
is predicted
to decline
slowly
, the death
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rate
is forecasted
to increase
slightly
.

The
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birth
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rose
significantly
from around 780. 000 in 1950 to 1. 000. 000 in 1970. Then it hit a low of under 600. 000 in 1990. The figure for the
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birth
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rate
increased
steadily
to 700. 000 in 2010. It
is predicted
to remain stable in 2050.

The death
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rate
was 700. 000 in 1950 and remained AT this level until 2010. In the
next
20 years, the mortality
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rate
dropped
slightly
to under 700. 000. At the
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end
the of the period, the figure for death
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rate
is projected
to increase to 800. 000.
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IELTS academic The line chart illustrates birth rate and death rate in a European country between 1950 and 2050.

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