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The given line chart shows us, the purpose of UK visitors between 1

The given line chart shows us, the purpose of UK visitors between 1 EdEmB

The given line chart shows us, the purpose of UK visitors between 1989 and 2009. This chart is divided into three purposes: business, holiday and meeting friends and relatives. Visitors of all purposes increased throw these years. The business was the main reason for foreign visitors in the most of these years. In 1989, about 6. 5 million travelers came to the UK. This number stabilized for few years but after that, started an upward trend and between 1994 and 1999 reached 9 million people which was the maximum number in two decades. After that, this number decreased dramatically and in 2004 was 6. 5 million again. In the last years, the condition was improving and reached 8 million visitors. Meting friends and relatives passed different ways. In all twenty years, the number of travelers who came to the UK to saw someone else went up linearly and from 3. 5 million people per year increased to 7 million visitors. The last purpose was business. Firstly the number of businessmen fell significantly however in the rest of the years this number rose dramatically to 8 million persons in 2009 like a holiday. Overall, in 1989 holiday was the main reason for traveling to UK and holiday and meeting relative were in next places. However, after two decades both business and holiday were the most important reason for traveling to the UK.

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 us, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiondesiredirectiongoaldeterminationwish
purpose
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visitors
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purposes
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business
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holiday
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business
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visitors
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million
 travelers came to the UK. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
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but
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started
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million
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number
 in two decades. After that, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 decreased dramatically
 and in 2004 was 6. 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 again. In the last years, the condition was improving and reached 8 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
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visitors
. Meting friends and relatives passed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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number
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saw
 someone else went up linearly
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people
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year
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visitors
. The last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctiondesiredirectiongoaldeterminationwish
purpose
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business
. Firstly
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of businessmen fell significantly
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 in the rest of the years this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
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 to 8 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
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 persons in 2009 like a holiday.

Overall
, in 1989 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfestivityrecessfestivalfeastanniversaryvacation
holiday
 was the main reason for traveling to UK and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfestivityrecessfestivalfeastanniversaryvacation
holiday
 and meeting relative were in next
 places. However
, after two decades both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfestivityrecessfestivalfeastanniversaryvacation
holiday
 were the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 reason for traveling to the UK. 