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The graph shows the average prices of International phone calls in Atlantis and Utopia

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A glance at the graph provided reveals the average prices of International phone calls in Atlantis and Utopia over five-yearly intervals from 1990 with future predictions to 2015. It is clear that both Atlantis and Utopia are forecast to see a dramatic fall in phone calls prices until 2015. The prices in Utopia were always significantly higher than those in Atlantis and this is predicted to continue to 2015. In 1990, the prices of phone calls in Atlantis stood at 1, 2 dollars per minute. From 1990 to 1995, this figure increased slightly to just under 1. 5 dollars. During the following ten years, there was a plunge in phone call prices, to just 0, 2 dollars per minute. 2000 to 2015 is predicted to reach a trough of approximately 0, 1 dollars per minute in overseas phone call fees for every minute. The Utopian phone calls prices, meanwhile, were much higher than those of Atlantis in 1990, with about 2, 3 dollars per minute. This was followed by a 10-year period of gradual decline as the price remained stable at around 2 dollars. After ten years, Utopia is forecast that Utopia’s prices will decrease sharply to 1, 5 dollars in 2015.
A glance at the graph provided reveals the average
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of International
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in
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Utopia
over five-yearly intervals from 1990 with future predictions to 2015. It is
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that both
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are forecast to
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a dramatic fall in
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until 2015. The
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Utopia
were always
significantly
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and this
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In 1990, the
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of
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Atlantis
stood at 1, 2
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per
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. From 1990 to 1995, this figure increased
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under 1. 5
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. During the following ten years, there was a plunge in
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. 2000 to 2015
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in overseas
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fees for every minute.

The Utopian
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, meanwhile, were much higher than those of
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Atlantis
in 1990, with about 2, 3
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. This
was followed
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remained stable at around 2
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. After ten years,
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Utopia
is forecast that
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Utopia’s
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will decrease
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dollars
in 2015.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the average prices of International phone calls in Atlantis and Utopia

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