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Ielts writing task 1 Process

Ielts writing task 1 Process ob8Xw

The flow chart illustrates the steps and aparatus used for producing cement, as well as the procedure of manufacturing concrete from cement for construction use. The diagram shows one of the possible ways to produce cement in six steps, and how cement is used to produce concrete on construction sites. First, in the cement manufacturing process, limestone and clay will be put in/through a crusher machine and crushed into powder. Next, this compound is mixed thoroughly in a mixing tube, then being transferred to a rotating heater where it is heated to the right temperature. After that, the powder is transfered to the Grinder and ground to smaller powder size. The result of this process is the fine powdered material, called cement, which would be packed into bags and is ready to ship to the next step. At the next stage of making concrete, a kind of mixture of four main materials including 15% of cement, 10% of water, 25% sand, and 50% of gravel (small stone) would be poured into a concrete mixer machine. Subsequently, the final products which is recognised as concrete would be ready for building purposes.

The flow chart illustrates the steps and Possible spelling mistake found.apparatus
aparatus
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
, as well
 as the procedure of manufacturing concrete from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 for construction This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
.

The diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 one of the possible ways to produce You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 in six steps, and how You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to produce concrete on construction sites.

First
, in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 manufacturing process, limestone and clay will be put
 in/through a crusher machine and crushed into powder. Next
, this compound is mixed
thoroughly
 in a mixing tube, then being transferred
 to a rotating heater where it is heated
 to the right temperature. After that, the powder is Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "transferred", the past tense form of the verb 'transfer'?transferredtransferee
transfered
 to the Grinder and ground to smaller powder size. The result of this process is the fine powdered material, called You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
, which would be packed
 into bags and is ready to ship to the next
 step.

At the next
 stage of making concrete, a kind of mixture of four main materials including 15% of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
, 10% of water, 25% sand, and 50% of gravel (This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 stone) would be poured
 into a concrete mixer machine. Subsequently
, the final products which is Possible spelling mistake. 'recognised' is British English.recognized
recognised
 as concrete would be ready for building purposes. 