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Energy Resources Production

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The pie chart clearly compares the percentage of natural resources produced in the year 1985 and 2003. Overall, oil was the resource which was produced in higher proporations whereas other renewable source of energy was the lowest in both years. Other renewable source has slight growth in its use from 1985 to 2003 and hydrogen production had no fluctuations. Year 1985 had oil as the major source of energy with more than fifty percent production which was 52% which dropped down by 13% in 2003. Nuclear power was second with 22% of making and nautural gas with 13%. Coal and hydrogen had a 4% variation. The least produced was other renewable resources with just 1%. In 2003, oil and nuclear power sources had a decrease in their percentage from 52% to 39% and 22% to 17% respectively. According to the data, there was a 10% increase in the processing of natural gas when compared to 1985. 13% usage of coal and 4% usage of other renewable resources. Hydrogen showed a stable usage.

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 a stable usage. 