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The graph shows the average of temperature and rainfall in Kolkata

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The graph demonstrates the average temperature and rainfall in Kolkata. Overall, it is observed that the temperature reach its peak in May; nevertheless, it indicated a moderate decrease in the end of the period. In addition to this, the rate of precipitation increased drastically from March to July, even though it showed a dramatic decline. First and foremost, the rates of rainfall and temperature commenced on the low points in the beginning of the year (roughly 25 and 20, respectively). While the percentage of temperature increased significantly and reach its peak in May( approximately 32), the rate of precipitation showed a steady growth (100). However, the number of rainfall indicated a considerable rise from May to July and reached the highest point ( around 330). Turning to other details, the volume of rainfall and temperature began to decline throughout the end of the period; therefore, the precipitation decreased to 150, when the rate of temperature dropped to about 25. Ultimately, the volume of temperature decreased to roughly 20, whereas the rainfall hit a Nadi in December (about 10).
The graph demonstrates the average
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temperature
and
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rainfall
in Kolkata.

Overall
, it
is observed
that the
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temperature
reach its peak in May;
nevertheless
, it indicated a moderate decrease in the
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end
of the period.
In addition
to this, the
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rate
of precipitation increased
drastically
from March to July,
even though
it
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showed
a dramatic decline.

First
and foremost, the
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rates
of
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rainfall
and
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temperature
commenced on the low points in the beginning of the year (roughly 25 and 20,
respectively
). While the percentage of
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temperature
increased
significantly
and reach its peak in May
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(
approximately 32), the
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rate
of precipitation
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showed
a steady growth (100).
However
, the number of
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rainfall
indicated a considerable rise from May to July and reached the highest point
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(
around 330).

Turning to other
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details
, the volume of
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rainfall
and
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temperature
began to decline throughout the
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end
of the period;
therefore
, the precipitation decreased to 150, when the
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rate
of
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temperature
dropped to about 25.
Ultimately
, the volume of
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temperature
decreased to roughly 20, whereas the
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rainfall
hit a
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Nadi
in December (about 10).
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