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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of both genres teaching in six educational stages in the United Kingdom in 2010. Overall, the highest attendance was to the women in Nursery & Pre-school stage, While, it was the lowest for men. In University field men were dominating in comparison to women. while, Primary school sector has witnessed a significant Gap in favor of women. And a fluctuating competition in (private training institute, Secondary school). And both genres were the same at College stage. In terms of nersury/pre school, women percentage was soaring by 96%, On the other hand, men percentage was only 4%. In University, men represented the majority by 70%, While, women were 30%. Women significantly superior men in primary school field by almost 92% when men represented just 8%. Both genres were exactly the same in college sector by 50% for each. In respect of Secondary school, women has exceeded men by 8%, In converse, men were superior in private training by 8% as well.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of both genres teaching in six educational stages in the United Kingdom in 2010.
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, the highest attendance was to the
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in Nursery &
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. In University field
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. And a fluctuating competition in (private training institute, Secondary
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field by almost 92% when
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has exceeded
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by 8%, In converse,
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were superior in private training by 8%
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