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Percentage‌ ‌of‌ ‌UK‌ ‌people‌ ‌who‌ ‌consumed‌ ‌daily‌ ‌recommended‌ ‌amount‌ ‌of‌ ‌fruit‌ ‌and‌ ‌vegetables‌ ‌ in‌ ‌2002,‌ ‌2006‌ ‌and‌ ‌2010.‌ ‌ Summarize‌ ‌the‌ ‌information‌ ‌by‌ ‌selecting‌ ‌and‌ ‌reporting‌ ‌the‌ ‌main‌ ‌features‌ ‌and‌ ‌make‌ ‌ comparisons‌ ‌where‌ ‌relevant

Percentage‌ ‌of‌ ‌UK‌ ‌people‌ ‌who‌ ‌consumed‌ ‌daily‌ ‌recommended‌ ‌amount‌ ‌of‌ ‌fruit‌ ‌and‌ ‌vegetables‌ ‌ in‌ ‌2002, ‌ ‌2006‌ ‌and‌ ‌2010. ‌ ‌ Summarize‌ ‌the‌ ‌information‌ ‌by‌ ‌selecting‌ ‌and‌ ‌reporting‌ ‌the‌ ‌main‌ ‌features‌ ‌and‌ ‌make‌ ‌ comparisons‌ ‌where‌ ‌relevant x2oRN
The given bar chart compares the proportion of English inhabitants who consumed the amount of fruit and vegetables in three different years 2002, 2006 and 2010. As can be seen from the graph, woman have highest proportions of fruit and vegetables in the given years. Meanwhile, children consumed the least amount during the research period. In 2002, the rate of the fruit and vegetables in women was highest, stood at 25% while the figure for men was minimal lower, account for 22%, which was 3% more than males. Additionally, there was only 11% children who interested with green products. In 2006, the intake of these things inclines and the values were 26%, 32%, and 18% by men, women, and children respectively. In 2010, the percentage of females was sharply drop, approximately 5% however it still became the highest figure compared to males and children. By contrast, the proportions of males and children also fall nevertheless it was a gradual decline, around 2%.
The
given
bar chart compares the proportion of English inhabitants who consumed the amount of fruit and vegetables in three
different
years 2002, 2006 and 2010.

As can be
seen
from the graph, woman have
highest
proportions of fruit and vegetables in the
given
years. Meanwhile,
children
consumed the least amount during the research period.

In 2002, the rate of the fruit and vegetables in women was highest, stood at 25% while the figure for
men
was minimal lower, account for 22%, which was 3% more than males.
Additionally
, there was
only
11%
children
who interested with green products. In 2006, the intake of these things inclines and the values were 26%, 32%, and 18% by
men
, women, and
children
respectively
.

In 2010, the percentage of females was
sharply
drop, approximately 5%
however
it
still
became the highest figure compared to males and
children
. By contrast, the proportions of males and
children
also
fall
nevertheless
it was a gradual decline, around 2%.
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IELTS academic Percentage‌ ‌of‌ ‌UK‌ ‌people‌ ‌who‌ ‌consumed‌ ‌daily‌ ‌recommended‌ ‌amount‌ ‌of‌ ‌fruit‌ ‌and‌ ‌vegetables‌ ‌ in‌ ‌2002, ‌ ‌2006‌ ‌and‌ ‌2010. ‌ ‌ Summarize‌ ‌the‌ ‌information‌ ‌by‌ ‌selecting‌ ‌and‌ ‌reporting‌ ‌the‌ ‌main‌ ‌features‌ ‌and‌ ‌make‌ ‌ comparisons‌ ‌where‌ ‌relevant

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