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The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts illustrate how the local government expenditure money in 9 different categories varied from the years 2010 to 2015. Overall, it is seen clearly from the given pie charts that pensions remained constant throughout the period and the education and healthcare sector both declined in the following years. In the year 2010, as regards welfare, it accounted for 8% and experienced a fivefold rise to 13% in 2015. As regards interests and borrowing, it comprised 5% in 2010, which increased to 10% in 2015. The initial figure of the defence was 17% and a decline of 3% was observed at the end. Moreover, education and healthcare, which had a ratio of 24% and 21% respectively in the beginning, fell to 21% and 20% in 2015. transportation and culture and leisure both declined by differences of 2% each. In contrast, pensions and others remained relatively the same.
The pie charts illustrate how the local
government
expenditure money in 9
different
categories varied from the years 2010 to 2015.

Overall
, it is
seen
clearly
from the
given
pie charts that pensions remained constant throughout the period and the education and healthcare sector both declined in the following years.

In the year 2010, as regards welfare, it accounted for 8% and experienced a fivefold rise to 13% in 2015. As regards interests and borrowing, it comprised 5% in 2010, which increased to 10% in 2015. The initial figure of the
defence
was 17% and a decline of 3%
was observed
at the
end
.

Moreover
, education and healthcare, which had a ratio of 24% and 21%
respectively
in the beginning, fell to 21% and 20% in 2015.
transportation
and culture and leisure both declined by differences of 2% each.
In contrast
, pensions
and others
remained
relatively
the same.
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IELTS academic The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015.

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