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The table below shows the amount of milk production (in million tonnes) in six countries in 1980, 1990 and 2000.

The table below shows the amount of milk production (in million tonnes) in six countries in 1980, 1990 and 2000. q6DY5
The table provide information about the amount of milk production (in million tonnes) in 6 coutries over 3 years (1980, 1990, 2000) Overall, the milk production in the US made up the largest part in all 3 years. While that in ireland was the lowest. It is also notable that the quantities of milk produced by 6 countries has increased steadily for 3 years, apart from Korea. In the fleeting glance it is immensely clear that, the annual production of milk in US was higher than other coutries and it was produced 121 million tonnes of milk. The production still increased moderately to 151 million tonnes in 1990 and peaked at 192 million tonnes in 2000. For Japan which is the second largest milk producer, it grew from28 million tonnes in 1980 to 32 million tonnes in 1990, then reached 53 million tonnes at the end of the period. Ireland’s milk production is the lowest in 1980 at 0, 6 million tonnes. However, it increased so much in 2000 and reached at 5 million tonnes. In 10 years earlier ireland has stopped product milk. In 1980 poland and portugal milk production both increased slightly. And reached through 3 years (1980, 1990, 2000) respectively 4 to 5 and ended with 6, 6 million tonnes milk for poland. And from 2 to 3 final 5 million tonnes with portugal. Finally, there is korea which started producing milk in 1990 and reached 31 million tonnes (3rd highest in 6 countries). But by 2000 it had dropped to 19 million tonnes milk
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over 3 years (1980, 1990, 2000)

Overall
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in the US made up the largest part in all 3 years.
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produced by 6 countries has
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steadily
for 3 years, apart from Korea.

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immensely
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that, the annual
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of
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in US was higher than other
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and it
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121
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. The
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still
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moderately
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tonnes in 1990 and peaked at 192
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tonnes in 2000. For Japan which is the second largest
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producer, it grew from28
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tonnes in 1980 to 32
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tonnes in 1990, then
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53
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is the lowest in 1980 at 0, 6
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In 1980
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both
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. And
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through 3 years (1980, 1990, 2000)
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, there is
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korea
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in 1990 and
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31
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IELTS academic The table below shows the amount of milk production (in million tonnes) in six countries in 1980, 1990 and 2000.

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