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The table below shows the percentage of people living in three types of dwellings in Australia in 2001 and 2006

The table below shows the percentage of people living in three types of dwellings in Australia in 2001 and 2006 XE3AO
The given table demonstrates the amount of people living in three kinds of housing in Australia in 2001 and 2006. Overall, it can be clearly seen that houses were the most common type of dwellings in Australia while the other location was not. The number of people choosing to live in a house was, by a great amount, the highest in both three areas in Australia which are at 76%, 67% and 88%. At the same time, there was a higher proportion of selected in Victoria compared to the Northern Territory, 12% before and 9% for the following persons. In addition, Flat/Apartments whichselectedto stay in Victoria and northern areas hold the last positions with 11% and 8% while in Tasmania occupy the second rank at 7%. Five years later, the share of the inhabitants of the house of 76 to 26% underwent a rocket, on the contrary there is a slight decline in the northern and Tasmanian territory, 65% for previously and 86 and 86% for the following people. While only a iny variant (extra 1%) in the individual relationship in Semi detached, flat/ apartments in Victoria, Tasmania and Flat/ Apartments in Tasmania settled, the proportion of residents in Semi detached in Tasmania is still 4%.
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table demonstrates the amount of
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living in three kinds of housing in Australia in 2001 and 2006.

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clearly
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that
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houses
were the most common type of dwellings in Australia while the other location was not.

The number of
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people
choosing to
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live
in a
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house
was, by a great amount, the highest in both three areas in Australia which are at 76%, 67% and 88%. At the same time, there was a higher proportion of selected in Victoria compared to the Northern Territory, 12%
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and 9% for the following persons.
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stay in Victoria and northern areas hold the last positions with 11% and 8% while in Tasmania occupy the second rank at 7%.

Five years later, the share of the inhabitants of the
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house
of 76 to 26% underwent a rocket,
on the contrary
there is a slight decline in the northern and Tasmanian territory, 65% for previously and 86 and 86% for the following
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people
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variant (extra 1%) in the individual relationship in Semi detached, flat/ apartments in Victoria, Tasmania and Flat/ Apartments in Tasmania settled, the proportion of residents in Semi detached in Tasmania is
still
4%.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentage of people living in three types of dwellings in Australia in 2001 and 2006

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