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The graph shows information about book sales in bookstores in UK.

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The pie chart below illustrates some information about which sales of different types of books in bookstores. Overall what stands out from the graph is that Horror the most popular genre. 30 percent of buyers want to buy books in this genre. The poetry genre has the lowest rate at 2 percent. The horror which is leader of genres in the world has more than 30 percent. Because Horror genre in one of the most interesting and influential topics. Regarding this chart Romance which is the second popular genre has the average amount of buyers it is 25 percent. As regards this chart Biography genre which the percentage of buyers is 2 % lower than the health genre.
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has the average amount of buyers it is 25 percent.

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