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The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. kKjW

This process shows how does the carbonated drinks are made. It is clear from the diagram that, there is five stages for the carbonated drinks to be done. According to what is shown the first stage start by cleaning the water then, in stage two heating evaporation and carbonation by the electric heaters and going on with stage three and four, while stage three is the mixing step where the colouring, syrup and flavour are mixing together, completing with step four filtering and filling in the bottles and cans in addition to the final step stage five in this level the cans and bottles are done and ready to go to the supermarket. To sum up, we could say that this progress have five stages, where the first stage is the stage that has more than three steps, while the last stage just has one step and that is the packaging

This process This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 how does the carbonated drinks are made
. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the diagram that, there is five You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
 for the carbonated drinks to be done
.

According to what is shown
 the first
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stage
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 by cleaning the water then, in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 two heating evaporation and carbonation by the electric heaters and going on with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 three and four, while You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 three is the mixing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 where the Possible spelling mistake found.coloringco louring
colouring
, syrup and Possible spelling mistake. 'flavour' is British English.flavor
flavour
 are mixing together, completing with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 four Possible agreement error. The noun 'filtering' seems to be countable, so consider using: "filters".filters
filtering
 and filling in the bottles and cans in addition
 to the final You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
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stage
 five in this level the cans and bottles are done
 and ready to go to the supermarket.

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this progress have
 five You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
, where the first
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stage
 is the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
 that has more than three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
, while the last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stage
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 has one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 and that is
 the packaging