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The graph shows how elderly people in the united states spend their free time between 1980 and 2010

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The graph illustrates ahout the different types of activities on which leisure time was spent by old people of united states between the period of 2010 and 2010. Overview, hiking is the most popular activity which was liked by most of the older individuals; however, older people were less interested in surfing the internet. As can be inferred from graph that 50% individuals spent their free time on theatre in 1980; however, this trend decreased by 20% in next decade, then again in 2010 it reached at approximately 50 %. From 1980 to 2000 near about 5% masses spent their spare time on surfing the internet wheras, ratio increased at 50% in 2010. Furthermore, the proportion of spending time on reading fluctuated in all years. There was 60% people who spent their free time kn watching tv in 1980 whereas, ratio inclined by 10 percent in 2000, then figure declined at around 65% in last year. The figure of hiking sharply increase in given time period and rose up at 80% in 2010.

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