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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. XdMA
The line chart indicates the numbers of men and women students graduated from university in Canada from 1992 to 2007. The male’s graduates are shown in blue line and female graduates are shown in red line in the graphical representation. Vertical axis represents the number of graduates and horizontal axis represents year of their graduation. The graph clearly depicts the difference of numbers between females and males’ students graduated from university in Canada. In year 1992 the number of women students’ graduates were 100, 000 while the number of men was less which is 70, 000. From year 1994 to 2002 the numbers increase up to 10, 000 for both females and males. After 2002, both numbers increase sharply but women numbers is still higher than men. In 2004 the number of females jumps to nearly 130, 000 and males’ numbers goes to around 90, 000. In 2006, nearly 150, 000 females and 10, 000 males were graduated. The trend shown in graph illustrate that females’ graduates are higher than male graduates in every year.
The line chart indicates the
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numbers
of
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men
and women students graduated from university in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

The male’s
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graduates
are shown
in blue line and
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female
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graduates
are shown
in red line in the graphical representation. Vertical axis represents the
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number
of
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graduates
and horizontal axis represents
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year
of their graduation.

The graph
clearly
depicts the difference of
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numbers
between
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females
and
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males’
students graduated from university in Canada. In
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year
1992 the
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number
of women students’
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graduates
were 100, 000 while the
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number
of
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men
was less which is 70, 000. From
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year
1994 to 2002 the
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numbers
increase up to 10, 000 for both
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females
and males.

After 2002, both
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numbers
increase
sharply
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but
women
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numbers
is
still
higher than
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men
. In 2004 the
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number
of
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females
jumps to
nearly
130, 000 and
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males’
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numbers
goes to around 90, 000. In 2006,
nearly
150, 000
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females
and 10, 000
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males
were graduated
.

The trend shown in graph illustrate that
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females’
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graduates
are higher than male
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graduates
in every
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year
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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