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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. QNxP
The given line graph depicts the mean number of people commuting in the UK via car, bus and train every day in a 60-year period from 1970 to 2030. Overall, there has been and will be an increase in commuters preference for cars and trains whereas buses has faced a slow decline over the years. Travellers have always seemed to have preferred the use of cars in the UK as the number of commuters using cars for their travel was about 5 million and rapidly increase to reach nearly 8 million by 2020. The projection for 2030 in use of cars, rather than trains or buses, also illustrates the growth in the popularity reaching 9 million commuters. Similarly, trains also seen to have growing number of commuters since it started around 2 million travellers in 1970, consequently has projected to have about 5 million commuters in 2030, surpassing buses in 2010 and making the trains the second-most used means of transport in the UK. However, the number of commuters choosing buses steadily decreased in this specified period. The average number of bus takers were 4 million during 1970s which was followed by a slow decline and is projected to reach only 3 million by 2030.
The
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given
line graph depicts the mean
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number
of
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people
commuting in the UK via
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car
, bus and
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train
every day in a 60-year period from 1970 to 2030.

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, there has been and will be an increase in
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commuters
preference for
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cars
and
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trains
whereas buses has faced a slow decline over the years.

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Travellers
have always seemed to have preferred the
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use
of
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cars
in the UK as the
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number
of
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commuters
using
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cars
for their travel was about 5
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million
and
rapidly
increase to reach
nearly
8
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million
by 2020. The projection for 2030 in
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use
of
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cars
,
rather
than
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trains
or buses,
also
illustrates the growth in the popularity reaching 9
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million
commuters.

Similarly
,
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trains
also
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seen
to have growing
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number
of
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commuters
since it
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started
around 2
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million
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travellers
in 1970,
consequently
has projected to have about 5
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million
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commuters
in 2030, surpassing buses in 2010 and making the
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trains
the second-most
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used
means of transport in the UK.
However
, the
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number
of
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commuters
choosing buses
steadily
decreased in this specified period. The average
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number
of bus takers were 4
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million
The article is probably missing here: "during the 1970s".
during 1970s
which
was followed
by a slow decline and
is projected
to reach
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only
3
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million
by 2030.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
205 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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