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The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. 0qx1

The line graph illustrates average temperature for a set of four weeks in a row with an average of total hours of sunshine per annum in three important cities; London New York and Sydney respectively from January to the month DecemberOverall number of sunshine observed for total hours per year in New York and Sydney with 2535 and 2473. Least among London with 1180 sunshine. Initially London and New York showed a significant increase in temperature for January February and March reaching to the peak in the month of July. Descending in the level of temperature to the end of year in December, with same temperature in November and downward trend was observed. Secondly a decline in temperature was seen after March lowest in the month of July and again climbing back to its mean temperature by the end of the year in November and December. However by the end of the year all the major cities realigned to its mean temperature as in the starting of the year.

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