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The graph shows data on the number of cell phone and land phone users in seven selected countries.

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The graph shows data on the number of cell phone and land phone users in seven selected countries. ‌ Overall, the number of landline users in US, Denmark and Canada are higher than the number of cell phone users in these countries. While, in Sweden, Italy, Denmark and Germany the cell phone users are higher than of the land phone users. ‌ To see in details, Most European countries have high mobile phone use. The biggest users of mobile phones are the Italians, with 88 cell phones per 100 people. In Sweden, UK and Denmark almost 80-90 percent of people use the cell phone. Whereas the highest percentages of land phone users are found in Denmark, which is almost 90%. ‌‌ In Canada, the US and Denmark, the numbers of cell phone users per 100 are consecutively 38, 48 and 71, while the landline users are 61, 38 and 87. The difference between cell phone and land phone users is highest in Italy and in Denmark. However, lowest number of land phone users can be found in Canada. ‌ In summary, US and Canada have higher land phone users than the cell phone users, while the European prefers to use cell phones than the land phones.
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